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The problem here I see is your mother hired me because you're not doing so well in English.

And you know this is a basic class and you have to do well because you have to pass it.

It's a pre-wet. So I'm seeing that you're writing these paragraphs,

but you're not stating what it's about.

You don't get to the point until like the next paragraph or even the paragraph after that.